The article Rising Seas: How They Change Our Coastlines
from National Geographic Magazine addresses the growing issue of the rising of
sea levels due to global warming. We saw last year during hurricane Sandy the
devastation that flood waters and strong currents can bring upon coastal
communities. Well, this may be a glimpse into the future due to the growing
heat of our planet. The sea level didn’t change that much for almost 2,000
years, the real change started in the 19th century when the earth
began to get warmer. We have begun to slowly alter our planet with fossil fuels
and flooding like seen during Sandy could become less unusual for coastal
areas. As a result of releasing CO2 and other fossil fuels into the
atmosphere we have raised the Earth’s average temperature more than one degree
and the sea level 8 inches over the past century. What we have done cannot be
reversed, even if everyone in the world stops burning fossil fuels now, the
existing gases would heat up the Earth for centuries to come. In May, the
concentration of CO2 in the atmosphere was at 400 parts per million,
which is the highest since about 3 million years ago. Global warming influences
the sea level in two ways. One is thermal expansion, water grows in volume as
it heats up, and the second is that the ice on land is slowly melting. Primarily
mountain glaciers have been melting so far, but scientists are concerned about
the giant ice sheets in Greenland and Antarctica. Scientists have determined
that both Greenland and Antarctica together have lose about 200 billion metric
tons of ice annually, which could cause the sea level to rise about 3 feet by
2100. “In the last several years we’ve observed accelerated melting of ice
sheets in Greenland and West Antarctica,” says Radley Horton, a research
scientist at Columbia University’s Earth Institute in New York City. “The
concern is that if the acceleration continues, by the time we get to the end of
the 21st century, we could see sea-level rise as much as six feet
globally instead of two to three feet.” If we were to melt all the 5 million
cubic miles of ice on Earth, which would probably take more than 5,000 years,
the sea level would be raised about 216 feet, the average temperature on earth
would be about 80 degrees, and deserts would expand greatly. Many coastal
cities could be under water such as Boston, New York, London, Venice, Beijing,
Hong Kong, Tokyo, and just about the entire state of Florida.
I, as
many others do, see this as a big problem. We may think that this isn’t going
to affect us because all of this is going to happen in 5,000 years and we will
all be dead. But, it will affect us now. Sea levels have already started to
rise and the temperature has already begun to increase. We learned in biology
that CO2 can’t be created and can’t be taken away, it just changes
form. Right now, we are burning fossil fuels at an alarming rate and
unnaturally increasing the amount of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. We
can’t reverse what we have already done, but we can put an end to the fossil
fuel burning. If we find alternative sources of energy, we can stop this
problem from getting even worse. We all want our future generations to live in
a cool, green planet instead of a dry, hot one.
This was an amazing blog post you put together in my opinion. You gave many examples witch shows you have worked very hard on this writing. For example you went back to hurricane Sandy and described how that connects to rising sea levels. Next, I found it helpful that you added how many years until we will have seas rising greatly, and how much feet the water will rise. Another thing I found interesting was you included why sea levels rise and I found it well written when you listed what we can do to stop these rising oceans and temperatures. You said " We can't reverse what we have already done, but we can put an end to fossil fuel burining." That made me concered, because there is no way we can get rid of the large amounts of co2 in the atmosphere. Finnally, I liked how you brought up the point that humans don't really care that the temeratures are rising, because we will all be dead by then, and you proved that wrong because temepratures are already rising. I really enjoyed your blog post, because it was very well written with grammar,examples, details, and you had interesting facts to share!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this blog post, Emma! It was very engaging to me because you chose an article that is relatable to everyone on earth because we are all in danger of global warming. It is definitely frightening to imagine many coastal states and cities underwater. This would ruin many peoples' homes, and would make the rest of the world more crowded because there would be less land area for people to live on. Though this will not happen in our lifetime, it is great that you mentioned we should still do something about it. Cities will not go underwater in this short amount of time, but temperatures will. In order to not live on a hot dry earth like you said, humans should make changes now to the amount of fossil fuels we burn. This topic is very interesting, and many good points were brought up in this blog post about it. Great job!
ReplyDeleteRight away the title grabbed me. I was really interested in learning about this topic. I knew, from previous knowledge that sea levels were rising. This blog post gave me a better understanding on what’s going to happen now and in the future. I agree in that right now most of us don't care about this problem because we will be dead and won’t experience the long term effects of this issue. However, we have to take it into consideration because next generations are going to be greatly impacted by the rising of water. It’s also sad to think that we can’t stop the burning of CO2 gases and even if we did, it would only be slowing down the rising of sea levels. There is currently no solution to this which is a big problem. Great job on your blog post and keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteConnor, I am going to agree with you that the title did grab me and it made me think, "I need to read this because it is a problem if our cities our submerged underwater." I also like how Emma gives examples of cities that could go underwater like Boston because then it makes me want to do something to stop global warming since Boston is so close to Reading. The only thing I saw that was wrong was some grammar, no picture and the paragraph spacing but everything else was great. You did a wonderful job on this.
ReplyDeleteYour title was captivating, and the article was well written. Your use of quotes supports your argument, and you displayed a thorough understanding of the subject. This blog was clear and concise, and included lots of information. I agree that alternative sources of energy will help our environment, and that if we intend to continue living our the way we do, we need to decrease our detrimental effect upon the environment. The best part about your post was that it made clear how horrible this problem is for the environment.
ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job with this. You told us just how much time it was going to take for things to increase by specific feet and also how they compare to what would be normal if we weren't using so much fossil fuels. Telling us that it might not effect us but it will affect our children was a good way to make you realize that while we can't see it as much now it will be causing so much harm to people in the future. A connection I have is while watching the documentary about Titanaboa they said how when the Earth gets hotter a lot of the species would get bigger which would be pretty terrifying. Good job
ReplyDeleteYour title captivated my attention, and the idea of major cities being submerged by water in future years is something that I have read about before. It seems pretty scary when you first think about it- from your title I pictured the entire city of Boston suddenly under hundreds of feet of water and millions drowning! I know that this is not what would actually happen, as the sea level rises very slowly. However, the recent speeds at which it is starting to increase around pretty dangerous. I can definitely see how pollution is leading to this dilemma today, but your statement about the concentration of co2 being the highest it was since 3 million years ago caused me to wonder what happened during that time period, and how the earth managed to recover from it.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job! This topic has always interested me so your title made me want to read it. You had so many important facts and atatistics that helped me to understand what is and will actually happen in a certain amount of time. It was also helpful how you included the cities that could be submerged because it made me start thinking about how inportant this actually is. I felt like I wasn't missing anything so I had to go back in the article so overall I think you did great.
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